Dying Stars
I hold on to this dream, beholden and true,
An everlasting kiss, divine amour,
Is this a dream? Am I living anew?
The vision clouds, and I am alone once more.
Chimes echo and beckon me to waken,
Your crystal eyes become a clement star,
I have evaded truth, I must be mistaken,
You are more beautiful than you know you are.
I melt in this embrace, a spell has been cast,
This canvas I see in your eyes, it does not end,
The love I have for you cannot be grasp,
Paths long forgotten are clear, the soul is amend.
The universe gathers around us, creating radiance blue,
Time stands still, we have become the hours of day,
The images fade, but I am still here with you,
I reach out into the vastness, do not leave I pray.
You hush my voice with a gentle touch,
The cosmos vanish, and I transcend the past,
Tears shed so long ago, the cherry blossomÕs blush,
Fall to the earth and breathe freedom at last.
Copyright 2002 (c) Dan Ferrara














Comments
Dont get discouraged about the comments, just keep submitting quality work, comment on other people's work in the same area (poetry, wallpapers, etc) that you usually work in, and have a signature with links to some of your best works. Usually works pretty good see? *points to signature and elbows resist* It's working already! hahaha. Seriously great work
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Second, you have a very classical style. I'm not sure how approachable that is to the common deviant, but I personally like it. My work is often in a typical, rhymed, structured style. deviantART seems to favor free-verse and experimental work.
Anyhow ... I really like this. You've avoided cliche for the most part and your imagery is unique. You definitely do have talent. You should fit right in here.
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great poem, and great image
btw.. i love malice too
This is positivly breathtaking...I love it, I only wish that my writing could be this good...You are very talented..
This one is getting a 10..It is very very good..
-ralyn-
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