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Dying Stars

I hold on to this dream, beholden and true,
An everlasting kiss, divine amour,
Is this a dream? Am I living anew?
The vision clouds, and I am alone once more.

Chimes echo and beckon me to waken,
Your crystal eyes become a clement star,
I have evaded truth, I must be mistaken,
You are more beautiful than you know you are.

I melt in this embrace, a spell has been cast,
This canvas I see in your eyes, it does not end,
The love I have for you cannot be grasp,
Paths long forgotten are clear, the soul is amend.

The universe gathers around us, creating radiance blue,
Time stands still, we have become the hours of day,
The images fade, but I am still here with you,
I reach out into the vastness, do not leave I pray.

You hush my voice with a gentle touch,
The cosmos vanish, and I transcend the past,
Tears shed so long ago, the cherry blossomÕs blush,
Fall to the earth and breathe freedom at last.

Copyright 2002 (c) Dan Ferrara
©2002-2009 ~resist4nc3
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Author's Comments

I really hope you like this one, it comes right from my heart. Recommended listening: Cowboy Bebop - Blue.

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:iconmatrix7:
I do so hate it when talented artists seem to get no recognition around this place. That whole collective rectum owns joo thing I guess :D (Big Grin) I really like this one, specially the part bout the armor, that was great :D (Big Grin) This is a really deep poem man, excellent work.

Dont get discouraged about the comments, just keep submitting quality work, comment on other people's work in the same area (poetry, wallpapers, etc) that you usually work in, and have a signature with links to some of your best works. Usually works pretty good see? *points to signature and elbows resist* It's working already! hahaha. Seriously great work Worship These new icons rock :D (Big Grin)

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"Talent is natural but genius takes work"
:iconmattspire:
First, the screenshot is awesome. Did you make that? Very intense. Having a very clickable screenshot definitely will get you more comments from the main page.

Second, you have a very classical style. I'm not sure how approachable that is to the common deviant, but I personally like it. My work is often in a typical, rhymed, structured style. deviantART seems to favor free-verse and experimental work.

Anyhow ... I really like this. You've avoided cliche for the most part and your imagery is unique. You definitely do have talent. You should fit right in here. :) (Smile)

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my newest piece
:iconlostlogic:
okay... i love this. this is truly a powerful poem, i think. and a great preview image for it as well :) (Smile) i read it twice. I liked it better the second time. Mmm... I showed my girlfriend this, just because I think its incredibly beautiful. :) (Smile)

Love

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has spoken. :D :weed: :worship: :weed:
:iconlostlogic:
mm i came back. im going to add this to my favs.

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has spoken. :D :weed: :worship: :weed:
:icontearsbleeding:
i read this multiple times..over and over..and i thank jake for showing it to me. it's really beautiful, and i envy those who can write poems this gorgeous. i absolutely love everything about it, every word, every line. and i think i read it at just the right time tonight. it really cheered me up, and i'm putting it in my favs so i can look at it later and smile back on it again. its lovely.
:iconkissoffsweetie:
there is a certain elegance in this poem that many people try (but fail) to emulate. you did it well. i think you captured not only the essence of a moment but also the taste of a dream... wow. your imagery is breathtaking, the balance of emotion is perfect... i just love everything about it. great job.
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i pretty much like it :D (Big Grin)

great poem, and great image Black Rose

btw.. i love malice too :D (Big Grin)
:iconralyn:
There should be a "love deviation"
This is positivly breathtaking...I love it, I only wish that my writing could be this good...You are very talented..
This one is getting a 10..It is very very good..Thumbs Up

-ralyn-:butterflytwo: (Butterfly)

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:peace:The world has gone crazy..Yet I stay the same....:peace:
:iconstarryangelicus:
wow..... absolutely beautiful. +fav

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